I'm not entirely sure of the message that you're trying to convey, here, but visually, I do like this piece a lot. Particularly, just the overall softness of it. It seems to have almost an airbrush feel to it, and it makes me want to touch it.
I especially like the contrast in colour, here, with the guy being rather muted, and the yellow and red on the bag standing out quite nicely.
The only thing that really kind of bothers me, is that strip of beige on the bottom. I'm not really sure what it's there for, and it doesn't seem to be really helping the image or adding anything. It just seems kind of stuck on.
Overall, though. I do like this, like I said. It makes me wonder what he's got in that bag, and what he thinks he's going to accomplish by keeping his head it in.
I especially like the contrast in colour, here, with the guy being rather muted, and the yellow and red on the bag standing out quite nicely.
The only thing that really kind of bothers me, is that strip of beige on the bottom. I'm not really sure what it's there for, and it doesn't seem to be really helping the image or adding anything. It just seems kind of stuck on.
Overall, though. I do like this, like I said. It makes me wonder what he's got in that bag, and what he thinks he's going to accomplish by keeping his head it in.
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